Hi i just want to share my book it's my first time to write here and I need a feed back on my story.. thank you :)

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18312771706315905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314415521

You have a boyfriend his name is Patrick you been a couple for 4 years , but the problem is he keeps chasing another girl, until. He said he wants to break up, after your break up, the girl broke his heart, and now he wants you back.
But you don't want to because of locked of love until you saw Kevin the guy in your dorm, you pretend that he is your boyfriend and you have been live in for 2 weeks but Patrick doesn't want to believe that Kevin is your boyfriend so you approach him and kiss him on the lips.

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    Please try my friend's book Lucem Curbidus. It still has 4 chapters and it was amazing!

      aw, under 20k... looks at my books- dang it... I am 2x that
      Well this is nice of you. Don't exhaust yourself. _

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