Heya, I'm an amateur writer and is quite new to this app. I love to write but tries to improve my work for better.
I would appreciate any suggestions, critics and review regarding my book, "The face behind the mask".
The story revolves around the murder of a woman named Viola and finding her murderer. The story holds suspense, mystery and thriller to unmask the murderer.
Title- The Face Behind The Mask
Genre- Mystery/thriller
Under progress.
The link to my story is given below...
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18727024605743105?utm_source=writerShzare&utm_campaign=4315089310

Thank you!!

Anotoki Thanks. I saw it. Please wait hehe I will read a few chapters tonight.

      Dear all
      I had started reading a novel long time back, but lost it. Its a love/hate sort The plot goes like there's a girl (college/highschool) living with her aunt who abuses her. Apparently she was responsible for sending an elite boy to jail, so he comes back to torture her with his brothers but finds her being assaulted (almost raped) by a guy in school, and rescues her, to torture her again, but somehow stops. The brothers also sympathize with the girl. The brothers are a respected family, good hearted.
      The guy claims to torture the girl but couldn't bear when he saw marks of abuse on her given by her aunt.
      This is all I remember upto the point I read. Please help me find the book.

        Anyone willing to do a review swap? Please read!! Paranormal Romace/Reverse Harem: Into the Night https://www.webnovel.com/book/into-the-night_18318176506341005

        Synopsis:
        Lilly Devereux is a busy, quiet, recluse. She keeps to herself, and tries to stay out of the way. However, when her CEO forces her hand to participate in a company retreat, she doesn't realize what she'll be getting into.

        They are the Triad. They are the kings of a tribe of supernatural outcasts, and they rule with an iron fist. However, they lack what all kings need, a queen. That is until a faithful encounter with the quiet beauty, Lily Devereux.

        Fate would have them together. Fate would have them rule. But Fate would have the Triad fall, should their queen deny the night.

          Luna_1101 Ok, so here's what I think:
          The central idea is very original, it allows thge story to have tons of fun situations and interesting dynamics which I personally think are the strongest parts in your novel and what I think you should focus on. Most of the story elemnts work and the characters are fun to follow around. In terms of writing it's good, it gets better the further you go into the novel becoming very good! The grammar is also mostly good, there are some small errors like instead of putting "her" when referred to a female charachter you used "his", but apart from that it's pretty solid! The only thing that I really didn't like was that at first you often jumped between tenses, sometimes narrating in past simple or perfect, other times using present simple or present continuous, it's something very small but it was really bothering me at first. With that said I definetely enjoyed what I read!

              would anyone like to review swap w me?
              https://www.webnovel.com/book/embracing-the-villain's-thigh_18730976305761305
              Others have the sun, but I have you.

              • Xu Wenqi transmigrated into a dog-blooded book as the villainess! To ensure her survival, she made up her mind to hug the golden thighs of the villain. However, the villain is cold, paranoid, and ruthless. No one knows how much of a burden he has to carry being schizophrenic.

              Disclaimer: This is a warm healing novel and may not fully and accurately represent those with mental disorders, especially schizophrenia patients.

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