Jo_J reviewed your novel. I like how you were able to add story structure to your novel. Nice work

  • Jo_J replied to this.

    RJMidnight I just gave you a review.
    Nice story. I read up to when the guy is getting turned to stone. I also added it to my collection.

    I edited my original comment.
    I was looking for like feedback on my first three chapters.
    What did you like and hate?
    Would you recommend it?
    Was it interesting? Did it have a hook?
    More like a beta reader.
    Thanks for the review though. Imma post it on Instagram.

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