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I'll get to reading yours in a bit, mine's a bit long, so it's alright if you read only one or two chaps and give a short review

    Let's goooo:
    I'll review swap with anyone who wants :D
    Thank you!

    Title: Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?

    • Synopsis:
      [Time left until earth's doom: 3 years]
      Yoo Chaerin, a 24-year old con-artist, opened her eyes in an unfamiliar place only to be greeted by this message.
      "What is this place? I'm sure this is earth but it feels... different." she thought to herself.
      "Why is everything so barren? Why do we have horses instead of cars? And armored soldiers fighting monsters? ...With magic?"
      Here, Yoo Chaerin will have to face an earth that's totally different from the earth she once knew. It is the earth where everyone has missions like in that of a game. It is the earth where monsters terrorize every single human being. It is the earth where everyone speaks the same language. It is where she has to find her place to belong.
      "I'll survive. And one day, I'll find him and make him remember me."
      In a world where everyone can use the system, how will Yoo Chaerin survive? Who is this 'him' she's talking about? And what if she's not just your run-off-the-mill con-artist?
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      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/earth's-doom-starts-with...-me_19006657805910805

      NakedApron Thank you! I've reviewed yours just now. Gotta say, your novel is very well written and I've added it to my reading list! Would definitely recommend your novel :) Looking forward to reading all of the chapters while I relax later <3
      Also thank you very much, I spent a lot of time making the cover ehe

          Mila_Alaia when you mention 'diary of ophelia' am i supposed to imagine shes penned down things along with quotations in her diary or is it only an emphasis to help me and readers imagine what transpired in her day? that's ittt

              Mila_Alaia OMG SAME, but honestly description is much needed while exploring characters and things, I hope u can read what I sent yesterday and verify it with other readers, its clearly my opinion, and I really enjoyed reading ur book so dwww!!! -

              Gaureeey + Ophelia is a great name
              + She journalists her days via short notes ( at least this is what I derived because of an issue ill address lateron., emotions, etc which gives the reader a very in depth perspective on her feelings.
              + The prologue is very fresh, at the end it gives the reader a good kick-start about the direction where the readers are heading
              +Youve made sure to maintain the language as the characters belong to a royal family thus the mannerisms etc are matched properly
              +Thea has a great personality
              - NEEDS THOROUGH FORMATTING BECAUSE IT WAS A LITTLE CONFUSING FOR ME, idk about other readers
              -The first chapter starts off well but the end could be more descriptive something that would lure the reader to read further about the adventures in the Forbidden forest!
              -If you can, add the first chapter in the Auxillary volume instead as a PROLOGUE!
              - A little character sketch or minute descriptions on how the characters looked, what their aim was, etcetera would help create a background and develop your characters, nevertheless, you could do it as the story progresses

                  comfortseavey yet awaiting! take ur time but it would mean a lot if u could read the story fully and after understanding its dynamics comment on the story! thank u

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