Mila_Alaia when you mention 'diary of ophelia' am i supposed to imagine shes penned down things along with quotations in her diary or is it only an emphasis to help me and readers imagine what transpired in her day? that's ittt

      Mila_Alaia OMG SAME, but honestly description is much needed while exploring characters and things, I hope u can read what I sent yesterday and verify it with other readers, its clearly my opinion, and I really enjoyed reading ur book so dwww!!! -

      Gaureeey + Ophelia is a great name
      + She journalists her days via short notes ( at least this is what I derived because of an issue ill address lateron., emotions, etc which gives the reader a very in depth perspective on her feelings.
      + The prologue is very fresh, at the end it gives the reader a good kick-start about the direction where the readers are heading
      +Youve made sure to maintain the language as the characters belong to a royal family thus the mannerisms etc are matched properly
      +Thea has a great personality
      - NEEDS THOROUGH FORMATTING BECAUSE IT WAS A LITTLE CONFUSING FOR ME, idk about other readers
      -The first chapter starts off well but the end could be more descriptive something that would lure the reader to read further about the adventures in the Forbidden forest!
      -If you can, add the first chapter in the Auxillary volume instead as a PROLOGUE!
      - A little character sketch or minute descriptions on how the characters looked, what their aim was, etcetera would help create a background and develop your characters, nevertheless, you could do it as the story progresses

          comfortseavey yet awaiting! take ur time but it would mean a lot if u could read the story fully and after understanding its dynamics comment on the story! thank u

              NakedApron i finished reading 12! i went back to 3 to check a few errors i thought i saw before leaving a review. 140+ CHAPTERS OMG ITS COMMENDABLE

                  Write_D_Words sure thank you for your honest review, you gave me a 3.2 and I'm quite surprised because that's REAAAAAAL LOWWW BRUH it was that bad considering you wrote a sweet review, i'd really LOVE to know what my story lacked so I can get better, if you can and have the time, do let me know. - good dayyy!

                      Chaoscaller Hi there! I've reviewed your story and it's amazing! :D The beginning definitely got me hooked! It's just beginning yet you're able to write it so nicely, I'm amazed <3 Looking forward for more!

                          mozza_mello kingfjosh brittney_ellison Darkhe_Prince Sweetdreamer20

                          Would you all be interested in a review swap?

                          3 Hours- A Gamble of Time.

                          C0VERING VARIOUS GENRES BUT MAINLY (SCI-FI ROMANCE)
                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/3-hours---a-gamble-of-time._18404695405551305
                          Synopsis-
                          Dave Dalton, an aspiring physicist, loses his fiancé who he treasured dearly. Plagued by his past and memories of her, he attempts to go back in time to protect her, but his battle is against his irreversible fate. Would nature accept this reverse or will his situation remain an inevitable mess?

                          My goal is to help you grow as a writer with my honest review, and I can only hope you can help me out with your feedback on this app or on Instagram DMS @Gaureeey

                          if anyone is interested to swap, tag me and drop your link / drop your reviews on my story and I'll find your book to review it!

                          mozza_mello I've reviewed yours! 3 chappies.
                          Mel_Aniv reading yours!

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