Mystic_Dragon_ your welcome, I have seen on a few of the threads you recommending your novel. I do want to warn you about self-promotion. It's amazing to self-promote. I know some have been getting in trouble! Just be careful where you recommend your novel! :)
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Please enjoy :) http://wbnv.in/a/30KBMzK
If its not too much to ask, I hope you can help me critique this book of mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-matchmaker-who-can-see-the-red-string-of-fate_18190742906772405
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Lexi_Roberson hi! First off, i wanna thank you for providing a premise for us authors to get honest feedbacks. May I have a link to ur novel? I hope you have fun during the writing workshop!
My book is
https://www.webnovel.com/book/3-hours---a-gamble-of-time._18404695405551305
3 hours A Gamble of Time
SCI-FI, ROMANCE, SUSPENSE, ACTION, HOPELESS ROMANTIC, ETC ISH
synopsis- Dave Dalton, an aspiring physicist, loses his fiancé who he treasured dearly. Plagued by his past and memories of her ,he attempts to go back in time to protect her, but his battle is against his irreversible fate. Would nature accept this reverse or will his situation remain an inevitable mess ?
I'm a new writer and because of health issues I couldn't upload during December but I'm consistently updating now. Hope you like it!
Thank you so so much
Gaureeey You are all welcome! I know as a writer and author on here it's tough to get honest reviews. I also know that the authors would appreciate these reviews, because they help so much! I just wanted to pay it forwards as well. I know I would want reviews and honest opinions on my own novels! I am just making sure everyone has that opportunity, especially the new authors as well. I have attached y two novels below. The first one isn't completed, but it is getting regular updates. I plan to have it finish sometime soon. It is called Totally In Love, it is about a cancer patient named Beth, who struggles with her life after beating cancer. She meets a boy named Sebastian, who is witty and a charmer. He's honest, and good-looking if I might add. The story follows Beth and her journey after cancer and finding a somewhat normal life. The Moon Shines On Starlight is a completed novel, it is about animal abuse from the animal's perspective. What that animal feels mentally and physically. This story is actually based on the rescue dog that I got four years ago. She was beaten and starved. I rescued her, and well she inspired the character Starlight. There is reincarnation within this book as well. Thank you so much for checking out my own novels! I do appreciate it as well! Be looking for a review in the next couple of months or days! My schedule is out of whack at the moment, and I am trying to review everyone's books! Happy writing!
Totally In Love:https://www.webnovel.com/book/totally-in-love-by-l.-roberson_18848271505278505
The Moon Shines On Starlight: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-moon-shines-on-starlight_18854014805302305
Gaureeey I left you a review :)
midnight_bloom I left a review
Lexi_Roberson Thank you so much!
Lexi_Roberson THANK U for your feedback, i just read your story a few hours ago, your account's name's different so I didn't recogniseeee!!!! Okay, wow that's a hell of a novel, Ive been an animal welfare worker ever since I was younger, rescued too many animals, thank u for writing something like this, I would add it to my list and read it shortly, thank u soooo much.
I just started writing not that long ago, and would love some feedback. Here is the link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/supreme-demon-lord_18410961505573305/dream-world_49680474955636890
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Here's mine! It improve a lot now but I want you to check it.
Title: Lumia: Other World
Link: How about you only read one chapter on mine then leave a review. You don't have to read the rest.
Title: Lumia: Other World
Link: https://www.google.com/amp/s/m.webnovel.com/amp/book/16777328005202205
Gaureeey THANK YOu for reading it and loving it as well. I do hope I'm doing a great job, unforuntunately the readers aren't letting me know to much. Haha. I am trying to read everyone's novels, but I have a few romance/Magical novels within my library along with yours. Right now I'm super busy with work,reviewing, and the writers workshop. I left you a review, I absolutely loved your book. I plan on reading more later. :) Yes my name is different lol. This was my username before I changed it, for privacy reasons. Again, thank you, and I think I left a review not for sure. I've been replying to all those I have. :)
midnight_bloom You are welcome! Just trying to do my part and help as much as I can! Happy writing and keep up the good work!