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Crackgear thank you!
Honest opinions and reviews are always appreciated I’ll read and review yours tomorrow
I read the first chapter, and your grammar is really good. Just need to tweak your sentence structuring a bit. If you go to the writing resources channel on the InkStone server, there’s a link in there about comma placement and how to break down running sentences. I love your story plot and think your story is really intriguing
Looking forward to reading it