The_Abyss_Returner

Hey buddy, I decided to take a look at your story and leave a review. Solid opening so far. I liked how you used covid to bring about the protagonist's death, makes your work feel very modern and timely. And I am intrigued by this dangerous new world the protagonist finds himself trapped in. Makings of a great story.

If you could take a look at my story and leave a review, I would greatly appreciate it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/city-of-vengeance_18729317605753805

    Craig_Watson

    Hey champ, I decided to take a look at your story and leave my thoughts in a review. Highly enjoyable, action-packed read. Great characters and an interesting game world for them to inhabit.

    As a fellow action junkie, if you could take a look at my story and leave a review, I would very much appreciate it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/city-of-vengeance_18729317605753805

      basementerz hey there. Done reviewing.
      Tbh, the language could be better.
      I left a few comments.
      Bt i don't think its cool to leave it there for other readers to read.
      So pls feel free to delete them after u read them.
      I would love to help u edit them.
      Since the chapters are small, it won't be an issue.
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      The above given id is my insta id.
      Feel free to reach out.
      Have a grt day.
      Thank u soooo much for reviewing TWO books of mineπŸ€©πŸ’–

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