The_Abyss_Returner

  • Jul 2, 2021
  • Joined Feb 18, 2021
  • Hello, can you also look at my Novel, a Game Genre, and I'm a fart in English, so check it out if you like to help me to make some improvement.

    Title: God's Legacy: Do Parasite can live in a Game World?

    • https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/19574479506800305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4316026370

      Can anyone read and support my book?

      This is a story of a teenager named Jackson Adams, he was an orphan and just left the orphanage a year ago, everything went under his plan until he was first at his work and got in an accident, he did not die due to accident but almost killed by a scheme of the other side. This story was about Games and Aliens, Magic and Power.
      A VR that can rival the Real World.
      The [ God's Legacy ]

      And now, the system asked Jackson if a Parasite can live in a Game World.
      Jackson wasn't sure so the System said that prove it himself, gave him the power that he can travel through the game world, and started his journey, but first, he also made a quest to become a parasite.

      Read it and you may find it interesting...

      Title: God's Legacy: Do Parasite can live in a game World?

      • Aleeshay_Suleman Sorry for, I faced some problems and only online now, Don't lock the Chap, for now, views weren't reliable, sometimes even if only one reader read your book, it will count as 15, look how many collections do you have, then how many of them were sending you a power stone, then if you think that the foundation were enough, then atart locking the next chaps.

        But I'm suggesting you to update more frequently at least 3chaps/week, and just start locking after 60 or more :) Have a good day!

        • Just read it!

          The food was ready on the table when the bald monk stood up, he bowed a little and his hand was clasped, close to his chest.
          He looked at the MC and said "Son, I have to go now"
          The MC looked at the monk, frowned a little, then asked "When the food is on the table, then you want to leave?"
          "Son, I'm sorry, but we monks don't eat food from the living! "
          When the MC heard this, he frowned even more, and exclaimed "Stupid !!"
          The monk was surprised to hear the MC, but before he could speak, the MC continued "The Monks do not eat food from the living, the monks have been extinct for a long time."
          "Animals, such as birds, chickens, pigs, and other types of meat you do not want to eat because it is meat from living creatures"
          "But don't you think? The vegetables, the trees, the green foods, all of them also possess life."
          "Animals came from their mother, plants came from the bigger plants, animals started as children, plants, vegetables started as seeds, animals will die, as well, the vegetables will wither! "
          "What does it mean, the animal, the vegetables, both possess life, both starting small and eventually dying"
          "So if you really don't eat from someone who possesses a life, you monks have died a long time ago !!"

          [Well, I really don't know many things about monks, but the sentence about plants also possesses life made me love what the MC said]

          • RJMidnight
            Yeah! I just don't want any arguments.
            That's one of my weak sides, and I'm sorry if I thought ur trying to make my thoughts bad.
            If u ever need help u can just ask me to make up of my fault and sorry:)

            • TaniaShava
              Sorry about everything, I think my words do not help anything, so u can just judge urself, but before everything, I just need to say that stay positive and don't lose any courage, just continue and don't let anything destroy u.
              :)

              • RJMidnight

                There is a big difference, Okay?

                Look:

                What do u want me to say?

                Just cry and be depressed about it?

                Yo! I'm just telling him/her, my point of view, that u just need to accept it!
                U want it or not, that's how life works!
                I'm giving a positive response here, I said just smile even it's hard, just accept it even you can't, because if u think too much about these pirated sites, it can only hinder ur rise, it can only make u fall.

                What do u want me to say?

                Cry, Be depress, be angry???
                What?

                I'm not telling all of these because I love pirated, but for the Authors not to lose the line and continue!

                If u ever don't like this message, give him/her ur own message and don't bother about the others.

                • RJMidnight
                  By the way, I'm not the one who bragged, hehe!
                  Mmm... Yeah, you are losing money, and now, ur losing ur patient, then what? Is there any effect?
                  Just want to say...
                  I'm telling that, because u can't do anything about it, then u can just accept it, right?
                  I don't need ur answer to this, because I don't care, and I'm just telling to the one asking to just accept it because there is NoThing can Do aBouT PiRaTEd, okay? Oka? Oka?
                  There are things we need to accept even we don't want to, she/he is asking for help/opinions of the others, I told mine, then tell yours, don't answer my opinion if u don't like it, but, give the Author a positive opinion if u WanT, okay?
                  If u can't help him/her, then that's it, okay? Don't just like, Bah Bah Bah Bah!!! As if...

                  By the way, forget it, just forget everything I said, and just stop this, because it's non of the topic.
                  Ur making it more complicated

                  • RJMidnight
                    No, because I just saw someone brag about it at the [Discord] because [pirated website] always pirating books with [good seller].

                    Yeah! You don't need to be happy about it, but, you also don't need to be depressed or think too much about it.

                    Because even the [Top 10] Novels here can be pirated by them, but what happened? Nothing, Look there, helplessly, so, why bother.

                    No need to think too much, we Authors can only look at it, with a stiff smile.

                    Sigh! We can't do anything about it, that's the truth. I also want to ask the [WN] about that, why? Why? Novels here can be pirated by the others.

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