Khawla_Amini
I can read your first 2 chapters in return for the same.
I will tell you if I was hooked, if I plan on continuing to read it and what I thought was weak/strong.
I will be grateful if you can provide similar feedback :)

    Khawla_Amini
    I found it and already left an honest review. It appears our genres are quite different so I would like to disclaim that I don't mind you leaving your honest opinion. :D

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