Hi party people!

I only started writing a couple of days ago and only wrote 3 chapters so far (about 5500 words). But am trying to release a chapter a day so if all goes well I get there eventually (I hope :D)

I would really appreciate a 2nd opinion on my work so far because I have no idea if it's any good at all, kinda hard to rate your own work. (is that me or do others have this problem as well _ ?)

Anyway... here's the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/smells-like-heaven_19612893905751905

Please comment honestly, I have a lot to learn haha so I really need it, thank you!

I will of course review a couple of the books mentioned here as well, after all, it works both ways does it not?

Cheers!

    alienfrommars Always happy to help! You mentioned being in the WPC so I've been feeding you power stones since I feel you deserve them. (That and I'll never place in a WPC ever because I won't sign a contract)

      JoJo_References Thanks!

      I will read your work (or as much as I can) in about 10 hours after I finish working. I will try and finish and post my review before I go to sleep!

      Thanks in advance for the swap! I just reeditted all my 3 chapters, they should be perfect now (grammar wise).

        PLEASE READ UNDER HER SKIN AND GIVE A REVIEW!!! I will read your novel and do the same!!!

        I think you would really enjoy reading the book. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand!
        Best of luck reading & writing!!
        This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❀️❀️❀️

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