Hi! I am looking for some review swaps. Mine is BL fantasy.

Title : [BL] RakhtaBhushan (Blood Ornament)

Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/rakhtabhushan-(blood-ornament)-%5Bbl%5D_19565039205641705

Short Synopsis : Golden prince, Surya, kind and brave, bright as the Sun. But a darkness lurked in his dreams, eroding his soul, his fate "unforeseen by the gods, a path converged by the paths of the past, present, and future."

Vidyut, hardened by the cruelties of life, embraced the dark art of Tantra, for which he was both rejected and coveted by the people of the five kingdoms.

Would their love endure the wrath of forces, both good and evil?

Princes, Spells, Gods, Spirits, Heaven, Mythical creatures, Wars, and Reincarnation, and so much more. It is based on Indian mythology, specifically Hindu mythology. But it is an original fantasy and focus is character arcs, a story about characters with both strengths and flaws.

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If you are interested, please reply to this post. Thank you in advance! :D

    Jay_Blu

    Okay I finished, also I know I said I would get to it immediately but I didn't because suddenly I had to go do something... I made some really super long point that is... just be careful with what you point out as good/bad and how the characters talk to each other??? idk... Really sorry I got it in a day or two (I'm so confused with Covid right now, idk what is the date, just when i go to school) later than I would've expected...

        miu_hozuki

        I did it... I would probably edit the first few chapters (I noticed that the grammar changed over time) and there are a few clarification things that I would get someone or something to check on just in case. There was some formatting, but frankly, I don't think formatting is all the important, but it can get confusing if it's not consistent. There was a conversion of ft to cm as a narration which might be weird if you're me who believes in the frog system of metrics. (It's like this systeme de something something internationale something. I don't know, I hate learning French in Canada) Finally... Other than that, it was a really really cool idea and, I don't really read sci-fi so I wouldn't totally know, really different.

            David_Neilsen

            um I was sort of wandering around the promote novel page and opening them (and I ended just... removing a bunch of tabs... there were so many... IN THE SPAN OF EIGHT DAYS THOUGH?????) and I noticed that you ended up turning up a couple times??? (Or I'm remember previous ones and I'm getting confused and I'm just writing a lot now) And I'm not completely sure if it's okay for me to just... tag someone else when it's someone else's... comment (reply??) thread? Though I think I've seen it somewhere?? So is it okay if we do a review swap (although this is someone else's thread thing???) Mine is Sileo or is the link supposed to be (Sileo)[https://www.webnovel.com/book/sileo-(restart)_18838888305240005] idk, whichever one turns out to be the link is the link... You don't have to do it... i'll still read yours,

                Katzenliebe I appreciate your feedback a lot! I also sent a reply to your review, check it out when you have the time.

                  BlaccLotus

                  kk mine is wait, you're replying to my thread so you have my link right??? eh, just to be safe:

                  Sileo

                  I'll do yours now

                  Just saying... I'm checking it and it's a romance and if there's anything that in terms of mood, I don't really mind if it's just kissing or whatever (it's the details of the mood that are.... O.ooooooo) I might skip those parts....... because um yeah...

                  Also just as a note; I have an aux. volume, there's no need to read that, it's 3000 words of just pure information...

                  btw, idk the requirements of a romance novel...

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