miu_hozuki

I did it... I would probably edit the first few chapters (I noticed that the grammar changed over time) and there are a few clarification things that I would get someone or something to check on just in case. There was some formatting, but frankly, I don't think formatting is all the important, but it can get confusing if it's not consistent. There was a conversion of ft to cm as a narration which might be weird if you're me who believes in the frog system of metrics. (It's like this systeme de something something internationale something. I don't know, I hate learning French in Canada) Finally... Other than that, it was a really really cool idea and, I don't really read sci-fi so I wouldn't totally know, really different.

      David_Neilsen

      um I was sort of wandering around the promote novel page and opening them (and I ended just... removing a bunch of tabs... there were so many... IN THE SPAN OF EIGHT DAYS THOUGH?????) and I noticed that you ended up turning up a couple times??? (Or I'm remember previous ones and I'm getting confused and I'm just writing a lot now) And I'm not completely sure if it's okay for me to just... tag someone else when it's someone else's... comment (reply??) thread? Though I think I've seen it somewhere?? So is it okay if we do a review swap (although this is someone else's thread thing???) Mine is Sileo or is the link supposed to be (Sileo)[https://www.webnovel.com/book/sileo-(restart)_18838888305240005] idk, whichever one turns out to be the link is the link... You don't have to do it... i'll still read yours,

          Katzenliebe I appreciate your feedback a lot! I also sent a reply to your review, check it out when you have the time.

            BlaccLotus

            kk mine is wait, you're replying to my thread so you have my link right??? eh, just to be safe:

            Sileo

            I'll do yours now

            Just saying... I'm checking it and it's a romance and if there's anything that in terms of mood, I don't really mind if it's just kissing or whatever (it's the details of the mood that are.... O.ooooooo) I might skip those parts....... because um yeah...

            Also just as a note; I have an aux. volume, there's no need to read that, it's 3000 words of just pure information...

            btw, idk the requirements of a romance novel...

                                                                  BlaccLotus

                                                                  I did it... I sort of stopped reading to do something, but I just finished it first thing in the morning OvO. It's really good, other than the plot, which might just be me being weird and picky with a romance novel, and Aveline, who I think should have some effect from the fact that her dad is dead and her mom is realllllllly busy. The descriptions were nice and I liked the interpersonal (is that the word???) connections between the families and businesses.

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