Review swap:

Title: Sileo (Restart)

Link: Sileo

Genres: Fantasy

All Tags: System, Late Romance, adventure, lgbt, bad language, happy-ending, Game-Like Aspects, Slight-Romance, sad and happy, Strange Ability

Warnings: Just cussing and maybe violence (?)

I'm writing chapter 19, and I'm on around whenever I'm on... idk, it's very iffy. But I check, mostly, everyday. I'm really looking for pacing... I found this while giving feedback on someone else's story OvO (Also, I think my thread was locked and I didn't know, so I just edited a post and re-posted some feedback... is that illegal? If so, srry...) I just want to avoid me writing something really bad for a millions chapters and then have someone tell me it's bad.

Synopsis (I changed it OvO, is it good?):

Sileo, whether it refers to restart or silent, everyone living there can agree on one thing - There is always a chance there.

There is always a chance to start something new. Even with all the monsters, creepy acquaintances, and strange government. That attributed little to the daily lives of normal ones.

Regardless if you are from another planet, universe, dimension, which is the case for Otto Kettering.

Being crashed by a car before he was sent to prison for murder (A murder he claims he had no part in) was bad, it was bad enough he was going to prison, but now he was in a new world. A world he knew nothing of and that was arguably for better or worse.

Sileo, the new world, brings with it strange happenings, weird people, companions (?), and the possibility to reverse everything that has happened to him or to move on and live a new life.

If only he could be less awkward, if only he could shut Ater up, if only he could raise his stats like a normal person (Players aren't normal in any way, but that's up to him).

Through the poorly drawn maps his companions (?) find and his built in system map, Sileo starts unravelling like a wool ball strung up tight.

[Welcome, Player #1001, please head over to the podium to register yourself before we send you off to your new home!]

    [unknown] Hey! Thanks a lot for the review and suggestions for improving.

    I couldn't find your link, could you please send it again? I promise I'll check your story out by tomorrow night.

    Thanks and sorry for the inconvenience.

      Nancy_Jim Thanks, I'll check it out. I'm warning you, I'm taking my time to write the reviews (unless it's copy pasted.) So I won't be uploading yours today or even tomorrow (actually maybe, it depends on my workload, aside from writing.) But don't worry, I'll surely do yours.

      Peace out :)

          Hey guys, I'm looking to do a review swap, so drop me a comment, and I'll check out your work. Thanks.

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/brockwing-vale_18162952206671005
          Imagine if you only had one hour to build a world for your family to live out the rest of their lives. And if you created some wreck of a place unworthy of the term 'world,' how would you feel about them still having to live there? With this pressure hanging over your head, would you perform better during the exam of a lifetime? Or would you panic and barely manage to write your name at the top of the page?

            Hey guys, I'm looking to do a review swap, so drop me a comment, and I'll check out your work. Thanks.

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/brockwing-vale_18162952206671005
            Imagine if you only had one hour to build a world for your family to live out the rest of their lives. And if you created some wreck of a place unworthy of the term 'world,' how would you feel about them still having to live there? With this pressure hanging over your head, would you perform better during the exam of a lifetime? Or would you panic and barely manage to write your name at the top of the page?

              Hello everyone, hope everyone is fine.
              Anyone up for review swap?
              I uploaded the new chapter today
              "Short Horror stories"
              Genre: horror, thriller.

              Please check it out .
              https://www.webnovel.com/book/short-horror-stories_19195906005601405

              Short Horror Stories

              Synopsis

              A Book full of Short Horror stories. A ride full of exhilarating tales of different scenarios which will make you crave for more. Someone who loves reading novels and stories is trying to write her own one for the first time here...
              Me finding out how relaxing is to write and create your own characters and alternate realities, anything to distract from the reality.. love to read horror genre novels and science fiction..

              A lil disclaimer: stories will be all fictional and nothing is related to any other author's stories All the story are just my brain farts(sorry not sorry) Enjoyyyy

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