mozza_mello

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18838888305240005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315287338

(idk if that link works, I'm on my phone. Sorry O.o. It's called Sileo (Restart) there are two Sileos...)

Yours has 48 chapters so it might take me an hour or two to read, so I might get it back at... It's 22:54 now, around 2:00, so in about 3 to 4 hours.

Thanks for the swap OvOOOO

      mozza_mello

      There's this typo i made on the review... (Q.Q) I'm really sorry, I'm on my phone...........
      Anyways, it's a really good story and it's entertaining while also having that sort of tension when something is about to happen. There's an issue with the quotations, but it isn't really that important and honestly, I wouldn't even really worry about it. It doesn't really affect the story. I would just watch out (in the future) for those PoV switches where it might get a little confusing if they're in the same chapter and are in the same setting. It's really goooooooood OvO. (And Wolf is just... Razor but kid form, idk if you know Razor, but he's cute)

      Edit: you probably have a 7 to 12 hour difference with where I live so eh

          Septic_Red

          I'll be able to finish this tomorrow (right now it's 1:12 am). I'll get it done in about 3-4 hours once I start. OvO, thnks for the swap.

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