Mel_Aniv Okay dear. I'd check it up and add to my library. Review mine as well

      Miss_Ebony I'm done with your review. Be sure to check everything I've written. Webnovel paragraph system doesn't allow for much of an edit, but I did what I could.

          Whannmarie

          Sure

          I will leave a review as soon as I can.

          Particularly, in 15 hours.

          Please?

              Katzenliebe

              Ok, thanks.

              I will leave a review soon, maybe not so soon.

              15 hours

              Please?

              Oh and
              👇
              Grammarly?

              And finally, the name stuff 😲

                  ESF
                  https://www.grammarly.com/
                  Grammarly, if you type that into Google is a grammar checker tool that is really really good. Things like clarification and all sorts of grammar are used and it even gives you the ability to set the tone you aim for while also allowing you to get a 'score' of how your writing is grammar-ly. It's basically a lifesaver for English class and a lifesaver for typos. Sorry this sounds a bit awkward, I'm on my phone (usually is on laptop).

                  Thanks for reading my uhhh novel? Novella? OvO

                      mozza_mello

                      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18838888305240005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315287338

                      (idk if that link works, I'm on my phone. Sorry O.o. It's called Sileo (Restart) there are two Sileos...)

                      Yours has 48 chapters so it might take me an hour or two to read, so I might get it back at... It's 22:54 now, around 2:00, so in about 3 to 4 hours.

                      Thanks for the swap OvOOOO

                          mozza_mello

                          There's this typo i made on the review... (Q.Q) I'm really sorry, I'm on my phone...........
                          Anyways, it's a really good story and it's entertaining while also having that sort of tension when something is about to happen. There's an issue with the quotations, but it isn't really that important and honestly, I wouldn't even really worry about it. It doesn't really affect the story. I would just watch out (in the future) for those PoV switches where it might get a little confusing if they're in the same chapter and are in the same setting. It's really goooooooood OvO. (And Wolf is just... Razor but kid form, idk if you know Razor, but he's cute)

                          Edit: you probably have a 7 to 12 hour difference with where I live so eh

                              Septic_Red

                              I'll be able to finish this tomorrow (right now it's 1:12 am). I'll get it done in about 3-4 hours once I start. OvO, thnks for the swap.

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