aiizutto Sorry, I'm swarmed with work this week and won't have time to review your novel approriately. Though I can do that at a later time.

      The_Mad_Titan
      Hello my name is Brandon Gould i am the writer of the Tylingariea Epic and i would like to do a review swap with you
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-tylingariea-epic_16428504506014305
      this is the link to my book. it is currently in a phase of editing and i have started back on writing on it, so the version you will be reading is not the final version
      i am also aware of the grammar and punction if you could give me any advice on how to improve my book that would be great
      the review will be up shortly

          ESF

          I finished it, there were some grammar mistakes that were pretty concerning, so I'd suggest using a tool like grammarly, but I'll simplify it here.

          Basically:

          1. Commas
          2. Capitalizations
          3. Sentence Structure (This one is really important)
          4. Ellipses [... or ....]
          5. Verb Tenses

          Other than that, it's good.

          edit: your username has my name in it... O.o

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              Mel_Aniv

              I reviewed it, just some things on emphasis and character stuff (I just type a lot). Overall it's OvO.

                  ESF I reviewed your book so please review mine

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                      Mel_Aniv Okay dear. I'd check it up and add to my library. Review mine as well

                          Miss_Ebony I'm done with your review. Be sure to check everything I've written. Webnovel paragraph system doesn't allow for much of an edit, but I did what I could.

                              Whannmarie

                              Sure

                              I will leave a review as soon as I can.

                              Particularly, in 15 hours.

                              Please?

                                  Katzenliebe

                                  Ok, thanks.

                                  I will leave a review soon, maybe not so soon.

                                  15 hours

                                  Please?

                                  Oh and
                                  👇
                                  Grammarly?

                                  And finally, the name stuff 😲

                                      ESF
                                      https://www.grammarly.com/
                                      Grammarly, if you type that into Google is a grammar checker tool that is really really good. Things like clarification and all sorts of grammar are used and it even gives you the ability to set the tone you aim for while also allowing you to get a 'score' of how your writing is grammar-ly. It's basically a lifesaver for English class and a lifesaver for typos. Sorry this sounds a bit awkward, I'm on my phone (usually is on laptop).

                                      Thanks for reading my uhhh novel? Novella? OvO

                                          mozza_mello

                                          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18838888305240005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315287338

                                          (idk if that link works, I'm on my phone. Sorry O.o. It's called Sileo (Restart) there are two Sileos...)

                                          Yours has 48 chapters so it might take me an hour or two to read, so I might get it back at... It's 22:54 now, around 2:00, so in about 3 to 4 hours.

                                          Thanks for the swap OvOOOO

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