YawningBrain

I finished it, it's really good and funny. I would suggest checking your personal pronouns and (completely personal opinions and stuff) maybe (unless you're planning on writing this cute story and yeah) add something to the characters (You don't have, not at allllll, I just ... think that ... it might be a little more interesting in the sense of story plotty murdery wise). If the story already is heading in that direction then ignore that (o.o)

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