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CrowGurung
I'm actually looking for some help, although are you just looking for experience or paid work? ;3

lilGoat Hi there, I'm looking for experience. I'm new so I don't think I'm capable enough to ask for payment. :P

lilGoat I just read a few chapters of your novel and I have to say, your writing is very good and I cant find problems . I think if you want to improve your story, you would need a better experienced editor :)

CrowGurung Hi, I just started the first five pages of my novel,Can you help proofread it and check for errors and point out anyway I can improve. I'm open to suggestions

Glojade I was reading your novel and it was pretty good. You can make some improvements like in the 8th line of 1st chapter you could write 'The best friend of Glory's mom' instead of 'Glory's mum best friend'. So it could be longer and a little bit better . And I think you forgot to separate the lines in chapter two. It has huge gaps in the chapter. And in some places you have inserted commas behind '?'. I don't think readers would have problems reading your novel. If you could send me your discord I can try to do clean ups , do changes in some sentences and send it to you. :)

How do I send you the discord

Glojade you need to download discord app and make account. My discord Id is CrowGurung#4204

CrowGurung Hey can you check my book the one that's called Blood Knuckles? If so I'd like to hear your opinion.

Hello, what novel genre are you into?

Hello, can you also look at my Novel, a Game Genre, and I'm a fart in English, so check it out if you like to help me to make some improvement.

Title: God's Legacy: Do Parasite can live in a Game World?

Mysterious_Pen I would say, I'm pretty versatile. I read romance , fantasy , video games etc. I just read books and just keep on reading them. So, I'm sorry if you wanted a specific answer. I read whatever Is interesting to me. No specific genre to be honest.

The_Abyss_Returner Hello, your novel is very interesting and I like it very much, So I hope you can continue it. I think I can make some improvements in your novel, So if you have discord or something we can contact on, we can discuss more . Also I don't know if you can change the title but "God's Legacy : Can A Parasite Live In A Game World?" works better than "God's Legacy : Do Parasite can live in a Game World?" but if you like your title there's no need to change it as it is your novel. :)

Iqfauli Your story is definitely interesting and I'm guessing its genre is martial arts and mystery? I'm sorry if I'm wrong. And about the novel I'm not too experienced in first person perspective so I can't say too much. Stories are written in past tense most of the time but I don't know about first person perspective. For example : In chapter 1, paragraph 6, 2nd line, I think it would be better to write "my parents were dead" rather than "my parents are dead" and "the cause of their death was from burns" rather than "the cause is they've died from burns". If you want me to edit some of your work for you, You can send me your discord or some way to contact you. I could do some changes and sent the result to you for checking.

CrowGurung Can you read my novel first? If you want to try it, I can give you a chance...

Hey, I would like to get an opinion as well
It's called Sealed Fate: Love Found and Lost

CrowGurung Okay thanks:) Then Ill just contact you on Discord!

Good day! I'm not seeking for a proofreader because I'm trying to learn to edit my own work, but I would like to know your opinion if I'm doing ok. Hope you can spare me some time. Thanks

Samyra_K Hello, I read a few chapters from your novel and it caught my attention right away. It's very interesting and I love it. But I don't think I can improve your novel because I don't think that I can write better than you. :)