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I can try to edit for you, you can contact me on discord my tag is CrowGurung#4204

Corola I don't know if you still need an editor. But if you still need one, you can add me on discord,
my tag is CrowGurung#4204

lala_sanara I like your novel very much. I'm kinda into novels like you wrote. And I'm sorry I don't know what you meant as you said you are dragging your story to the ruins. If you mean grammatically you can read some English novels and stuffs to improve your writing. For example : In chapter 1, Line 1, I think " After reading the novel for two years" works better than "for two years of reading this novel." and if you meant the story, you can always ask the readers and get inspiration from other novels :). If you need proofreader and some editing you can contact me on discord my id is CrowGurung#4204 and I wont take payment as I'm only looking for experience.

AmateurAuthor I have read your novel and I liked it. You also have some mistakes here and there but I don't think most people would notice it or criticize it. The mistake is minimum it's nothing to worry about too much. :)

The_Abyss_Returner Okay! My discord name is CrowGurung#4204

bishop1275 Hello, I can say you have pretty good writing .But you still have some grammatical mistakes, Thought its nothing too big for readers to criticize about it. And it is something you can improve more as you write. For example : In chapter 1, Line 60, It would be better to write " would you like pain medication for your head instead" rather than "do you like a pain medication instead". Sentences as that could be improved as you get more experience. But it isn't inconvenient for the readers. :)

Samyra_K Hello, I read a few chapters from your novel and it caught my attention right away. It's very interesting and I love it. But I don't think I can improve your novel because I don't think that I can write better than you. :)

Iqfauli Your story is definitely interesting and I'm guessing its genre is martial arts and mystery? I'm sorry if I'm wrong. And about the novel I'm not too experienced in first person perspective so I can't say too much. Stories are written in past tense most of the time but I don't know about first person perspective. For example : In chapter 1, paragraph 6, 2nd line, I think it would be better to write "my parents were dead" rather than "my parents are dead" and "the cause of their death was from burns" rather than "the cause is they've died from burns". If you want me to edit some of your work for you, You can send me your discord or some way to contact you. I could do some changes and sent the result to you for checking.

The_Abyss_Returner Hello, your novel is very interesting and I like it very much, So I hope you can continue it. I think I can make some improvements in your novel, So if you have discord or something we can contact on, we can discuss more . Also I don't know if you can change the title but "God's Legacy : Can A Parasite Live In A Game World?" works better than "God's Legacy : Do Parasite can live in a Game World?" but if you like your title there's no need to change it as it is your novel. :)

Mysterious_Pen I would say, I'm pretty versatile. I read romance , fantasy , video games etc. I just read books and just keep on reading them. So, I'm sorry if you wanted a specific answer. I read whatever Is interesting to me. No specific genre to be honest.

Glojade you need to download discord app and make account. My discord Id is CrowGurung#4204

Glojade I was reading your novel and it was pretty good. You can make some improvements like in the 8th line of 1st chapter you could write 'The best friend of Glory's mom' instead of 'Glory's mum best friend'. So it could be longer and a little bit better . And I think you forgot to separate the lines in chapter two. It has huge gaps in the chapter. And in some places you have inserted commas behind '?'. I don't think readers would have problems reading your novel. If you could send me your discord I can try to do clean ups , do changes in some sentences and send it to you. :)

lilGoat I just read a few chapters of your novel and I have to say, your writing is very good and I cant find problems . I think if you want to improve your story, you would need a better experienced editor :)

lilGoat Hi there, I'm looking for experience. I'm new so I don't think I'm capable enough to ask for payment. :P

Hello everyone, One of my hobby is reading novels and have read quite a few novels but I have dropped quite a few novels as well due to it not being grammatically correct. Due to this reason I became quite interested in becoming an editor. But I have no experience, but I do believe I am quite good in English. So I wanted to ask if there is a way for me to find authors that need some editing to be done? or is there anywhere I can get some experience in this field of work.

And if any new authors currently need an editor and would like me to edit their work?

Or if I am not allowed to post this kind of topic please inform me and I will delete the post.

Thank you for your time.