Madym I will review yours if you do mine😁 Link is above or search The Aquarian Crown app/website. Like and/or reply to this so I know you’re down to swap😁

    MECC Done with your review too! It's under the name Lavvy. By the way, loved your story!

    miu_hozuki Done reviewing your story! Quite surprised, it's the first of a kind that I read. Not exactly my type, but I see how amateurs of the genre will like it.

    One thing you could add though: why not have your main character watch herself in the mirror in the first or second chapter? That would allow you to describe how your character looks like, and how she feels about her body. It will be a nice clue to her psyche, and later on, it could help show character development.

      Web Novel Novel Ask