Jigx Reviewed! I like the setting and the characters. The leveling up is also well-designed. There's little doubt you write as you see things happening in your mind, which is good! It's creative. Now, however, if you ask me what you can improve, I'd say that the most notable thing is grammar. However, other reviewers have told you already, so I won't insist. Just try to edit with an advance tense/grammar checker or even request help from someone else. With that fixed, it'll really be good! Kudos!

    It's only Thursday and got one last book to review.
    Does anyone still want to do an honest review swap?

    Will do a read up to 5 chapters (if there would be more review swaps. 10 if it's just 2 books)
    Then will give an honest review~
    Books will stay in my library, too~

    Just DM me at Discord SummerStardust#8540
    or
    leave a review in my story and will surely get back to you~
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/dandelion-memories_19716052205015505

      Shobe0621 Sent you a request on discord, I'll be online in a few hours but then we can swap if you'd like. I'm totally down to do a more in-depth review.

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