Andrew_Oak Hi Andrew_Oak. I have also done reviewing yours on my side. You have a nice potential story plot here. I really like that. I am a fan of galactic novels. :)

One thing that I did not put in the review is that I think you could improve your manuscript in terms of the format. Sometimes, I found your paragraph was too long, and there was no smooth transition from sentence to sentence. If you could revise that, I think it would make a reader follow your story easier.

If you would like me to put this in the review too, please let me know. I will be happy to repost it. :)

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