Yulainei
I like the pace that it is getting in the first chapter and let me go leave a review. I want to see how the story going to turn out.

    AmateurAuthor Thank you for your attention and good point about the defect of my work. Design, Format, Pargraph is important for the perception, for the reader. I am a novice author. This is something I have an obligation to learn. Thank you for your pointing out the lack of my work.

    [unknown] done. But you should really focus on grammar

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