Yulainei Thanks for your review! I reviewed all your current chapters. I liked the reading, it seems the story will develop fast. You've left out some unexplained clues there and there, which is interesting and helps to maintain a sense of mystery, inviting the reader to go further in his reading. The action is well-portrayed too.
Finally, you have designed many characters. I know how hard it can be to make all of them live, but so far you've managed. So good job! Keep on!

      captiun Thank you so much, I just wanted to know what I need to change in my book.

          DelzGB sure, I'll keep it in my library. A little busy now but I'll surely do it tonight.

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