Nr_Yet1208 Done ! I left you the best review I've left on web novel, I think. But know that I really mean it. You deserve it ! However, I was unable to find any problem with your writing....sorry. i guess your command of English and writing skill are too much above mine for me to spot improvement areas. Anyway, keep up the good work, but make sure you have decent sleep and rest ! Judging by the rate of release, I'm actually worried haha
