Dedz_ I think u write really well, but I have to say some of the stuff made me a little uncomfortable. I'm not very mature in that respect lol.You don't have read mine anymore, BTW. But you mc monologue was written well!

Easy_Tiger thank you very much! Your writing style is amazing, it felt like I'm watching a Netflix show

    Anybody interested in swap review?
    I am writing a 'real life' story.

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