Jyojiko yours is finished too. Good plot progression but you might want to change some sentences. I mean change tense that is. Or if it's a personal choice, feel free to ignore me lol

    I'm doing some review swaps (I will legit read your stuff I'm not here to play the "here is a bunch of stars" game. However if that is what you wish to do for me I won't say no lol. I'm just saying I will give a legitimate review without being too harsh naturally.

    It is for my latest Fantasy of Ash and Blood. If I see your review I will hop on over and do one for you asap.

    Respectfully,

    JY Lewis.

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/fantasy-of-ash-and-blood_20111893006788305

      Aarya_Shrivastav

      Hi there buddy, I decided to check out your story and leave a review. Really enjoying the premise and the end of chapter two left me desperate to read more haha. Your story sounds like it will be quite a ride.

      If you could take a look at my story and leave a review, I would greatly appreciate it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/city-of-vengeance_18729317605753805

        Easy_Tiger Read it mate and it was certainly good. You have a great prologue really pulls you in instantly. Keep up the work I will add it to my read list and update the review as I go.

        To those I reviewed but didn't reviewed me back, please do review my book. Be fair. thank you : ))

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