deletedddd Damn... I didn't even get a notification from you... buggy forum sigh Ok I'll take a look right now.

    Davidwatts6957 thanks for the suggestions. I will first cross 50,000 words mark and then get my brother to edit the chaps. He is way better than me in this regard and is a part time successful poet. I will ask you at that time again.

    Thanks anyways.

      Davidwatts6957

      Hey! I just reviewed yours back. I pointed some of the punctuation and grammar issues I saw. I hope it helps in improving your novel. I saw on your reviews that some of them points out your grammar but really give you any tips on it. So I kinda felt obliged to do so "

      I hope you don't feel offended.

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