Envision done with yours. Maybe do some proofreading? And improving the dialogues might help too.
It's a good story so keep at it and good luck

    Nr_Yet1208 That is the plan today. I moved all my chapters to a google doc for editing. I'm noticing more and more errors in my writing now. I will review your book after I finish work. Your title seems a little nsfw.

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