listen_moon bro I literally went against my conscience when giving you the review. Your plot was like, what the hell. The girls there are not transmigrators or reincarnations so why would anyone judge their character and like, in shinchan, hemawari likes shiny objects and goes after rings and necklaces but that does not make hermaterialistic. At least give them the time needed. You don't throw a three year old girl and expect her to kill a mutant beast and the cuteness does not work there.

      _hestia_ yeah I went to do yours that day but probably went somewhere else. Did yours. Just not my genre.

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          A voice will speak from the sky, begging God for mercy.
          The angels will tremble and the demons will lament.
          Four winds will rise and then the rain bow will fall, driving the demons back to Hell.
          The four elements will cry in a strong voice: "Mercy, Jesus, son of Mary, as you are God and King of heaven!

          Just editing for fun.

          A voice speaks from the Earth below, reaching the sky above, begging The God for mercy.
          The angels tremble and the demons lament.
          Four winds arise and the rainbow falls, driving the demons back to Hell.

          The four elements cry in unison:
          "Mercy, Jesus, son of Mary, as you are God and King of heaven!"

          Source: his synopsis

              ArnoldAdi99 yeah yours wasnt my genre either but we do our best to appreciate hard work . Thanks anyway

                  Here I am. Review swap, anyone interested?
                  Not looking for a perfect review, just tell me what you really think.

                  What about a retired hero.
                  Title: The To-do list
                  Genre: Slice of life, modern cultivation ish

                  A very unique story of a retired hero who vows to complete his best friend to-do list.
                  Raizel woke up to see the world completely different in a way he is not sure if it was good or bad. It is not his business though, after saving the world and acquiring karma, he could care less. Well, that is what he thinks.
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                    ArnoldAdi99 Bro all the things are not settled yet, in further chapter you will find out how, why etc. Otherwise if left half readed, it'll sound like a crackheaded plot. And that's my catching technique of readers. But you should have given honest review instead of sugar coated one.

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