Hey I'm here for a review swap, I review yours you review mine simple you can also vote
The name of my novel
The dream saga
Link -http://wbnv.in/a/60g1MAc

Also, read the bloody angel

    ihatepower_45 Bro, just in the first screen, 'I' is used too many times uselessly. You should remove them. And maybe if you agree, shouldn't a girl whom you are mentioning as a fighter have authoritative or majestic vice rather than an angelic one. Also your tone goes more like third person than first person POV.

    Anyways I will give you a five star review and give me one.

      ArnoldAdi99 I have a bad habit of writing in writing in third person. Also main character is a dude lol, no matter how much I edit it everyone keep calling him a girl.

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