listen_moon bro I literally went against my conscience when giving you the review. Your plot was like, what the hell. The girls there are not transmigrators or reincarnations so why would anyone judge their character and like, in shinchan, hemawari likes shiny objects and goes after rings and necklaces but that does not make hermaterialistic. At least give them the time needed. You don't throw a three year old girl and expect her to kill a mutant beast and the cuteness does not work there.
June 2021- Review Swap here!
ihatepower_45 Hey I reviewed your book a few days ago... do Review mine.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/night-shade_20008415105374605
Spities Hey reviewed ur book a few days ago. Do review mine
ArnoldAdi99 Hey reviewed your book a couple days ago... do review mine
Yashima099 I'll review yours!
Riyah404 I'm up
Here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/never-normal_20024857606712105
Will review yours soon!
kuhaku_sora i wrote my reply on yours. Ready for the swap.
_hestia_ yeah I went to do yours that day but probably went somewhere else. Did yours. Just not my genre.
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A voice will speak from the sky, begging God for mercy.
The angels will tremble and the demons will lament.
Four winds will rise and then the rain bow will fall, driving the demons back to Hell.
The four elements will cry in a strong voice: "Mercy, Jesus, son of Mary, as you are God and King of heaven!
Just editing for fun.
A voice speaks from the Earth below, reaching the sky above, begging The God for mercy.
The angels tremble and the demons lament.
Four winds arise and the rainbow falls, driving the demons back to Hell.
The four elements cry in unison:
"Mercy, Jesus, son of Mary, as you are God and King of heaven!"
Source: his synopsis
Riyah404 Done!
Thank you so much for the review., I'm also done reviewing your story., :)
Yulainei No thank you, I don't need new reviews for now.
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ArnoldAdi99 yeah yours wasnt my genre either but we do our best to appreciate hard work . Thanks anyway
Hey reviewed ur book a few days ago. Do review mine
https://www.webnovel.com/book/one-first-promise_20278368706943205
ArnoldAdi99 Yea, i appreciate it bro.
ArnoldAdi99
Hum, nice work!
nod nod nod
DaoistDYyYBE
Alright, I reviewed yours.
Have fun with mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-and-the-huntsman_19322730906149105
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Hey I'm here for review swaps review mine I'll do your fair
Name - the bloody angel
Link http://wbnv.in/a/cdg2RjY
listen_moon yo can we swap i really want an opinion on my novel