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It looks good. But it's a tad too red for me. The background color stick out too much and blurs your title. Even though you used a white font, your title doesn't stick out enough to me.
Also, the text you wrote at top is unreadable. I had to zoom in (and I use a computer) to actually be able to read it. Two reasons:
- it's too small
- the stylish font actually defies its purpose and ruins the readability.
The zodiac signs that draw two lines (top and bottom) are uneven. It creates a sense of imbalance and looks unprofessional. Also, your zodiac pictures are almost only red. They don't stick out as much as they should because of the background.

Anyway, the real problem is the background. So either you find another one or you tone down the red color.

Hope it helps.

Edit: Don't forget to add your name too. If you have further questions, I could probably answer most of them.
Edit#2: Next time, open a thread instead of using the review swap for that. People here won't even notice your small post because they are too busy looking for review swaps, not cover opinion swap.

      Davidwatts6957

      Sure! Let's review swap!

      Done reviewing your story! :) You have an interesting idea! :)

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