TaintedMetal hey bro, just my suggestion. I read the first chapter and this thought came to me. When you were describing the tavern, that would be a place that gives a rustic feeling and instead of a wooden building if you had mentioned something like old whit oak, or walnut or the wood type, it would have just sounded better and would have made a vivid image of the scene. Of course you can ignore that but you can also research the wood used for buildings of that time. It would just make it slightly more visual. Though I enjoyed what you gave in it.

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