Lamelle

UP FOR REVIEW SWAP?

THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST

If you are interested, here's the link:

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-7teen-let-the-pain-exist_19117090906475105

Adwaid_Nambiar
Done with yours.
If you can write one for me it will be great
https://www.webnovel.com/book/conquer-the-world-with-skills_20253652806697105

Sun23 thank you so much.

Adwaid_Nambiar sure

Anyone wanna do a review swap and collection swap with me?
LINK: SHADOW ALPHA 2089

Shubhangi_Kene Done.

Rage_1
I want to swap
https://www.webnovel.com/book/conquer-the-world-with-skills_20253652806697105

DaoistVinicius done

Wookiesmuggler
OK thanks. I'll get to yours rn.

Wookiesmuggler
I reviewed yours as well. Promising story so far!

KingAraragi
how do you feel i can improve on the info dump parts? especially first chapter, i want to know your thoughts on that

Wookiesmuggler
Well personally for me that was a problem with my early stories. I learned to just slowly let information seep in. I usually only introduce a few characters at the beginning, and I make sure to make it clear what their personalities and goals are. After the reader fully understands who the characters (Or just the main character) are, then you begin to explain the powers and stuff. This is just what I do though, I'm no professional by any means. Your story was actually really interesting either way. Just take a little more time to flesh out each and every piece of info. I really think your story has the makings to be a top book on here!

Wookiesmuggler
(Take all this with a grain of salt though, I've seen your other stories, and you're much more accomplished and popular than me)

Wookiesmuggler Hi! Wanna swap with me? Here's my link:
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Wookiesmuggler review swap, please? Thank you! ^ _ ^

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