Anyone wanna do a review swap and collection swap with me?
LINK: SHADOW ALPHA 2089
July 2021- Review Swap here!
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Adwaid_Nambiar
Done. Here's mine
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-under-the-name-of-god_20483981006913205
It's just 2 chapters for now (three if the auxilary chapter included). Constructive criticism or straight out trashing, any feedback is fine
. I just wanna know the flaws and improve.
Shubhangi_Kene Done.
DaoistVinicius done
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Who want to swap and exchange colls also? 
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18220104405757805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314249117
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KingAraragi
sup man i reviewed yours
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-impurity's-ascension_20104942505517105
Wookiesmuggler
OK thanks. I'll get to yours rn.
Wookiesmuggler
I reviewed yours as well. Promising story so far!
KingAraragi
how do you feel i can improve on the info dump parts? especially first chapter, i want to know your thoughts on that
Wookiesmuggler
Well personally for me that was a problem with my early stories. I learned to just slowly let information seep in. I usually only introduce a few characters at the beginning, and I make sure to make it clear what their personalities and goals are. After the reader fully understands who the characters (Or just the main character) are, then you begin to explain the powers and stuff. This is just what I do though, I'm no professional by any means. Your story was actually really interesting either way. Just take a little more time to flesh out each and every piece of info. I really think your story has the makings to be a top book on here!
Wookiesmuggler
(Take all this with a grain of salt though, I've seen your other stories, and you're much more accomplished and popular than me)
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alright i have 7 reviews so far, and dang i really wanna get to ten reviews so the stars will show.
anyone feel free to review my novel, then @ me to get the same
thank you in advance
edit: link https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-impurity's-ascension_20104942505517105
Wookiesmuggler Hi! Wanna swap with me? Here's my link:
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/19720733505038205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310748038
Wookiesmuggler review swap, please? Thank you! ^ _ ^
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/scarlette-overland_19923920306012005
Wookiesmuggler I will do it after reading a few chaps.
Here's my novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/fire-mage_13051972806542205
@WordsmithVenerable Hey ! Haven't forgotten me I hope ? :D
modestbaddie Hey, I have not received your review yet by your or another account of yours. It has been over a week. Please kindly give me a review (please actually read at least 3 chaps) or I will remove my review on your novel. Thanks.