Dee_author I don't want to be so blunt in my review that it would offend you so I will post it here instead and so that others can learn too because I am seeing it a lot.

Look, don't explain to your readers what they should think about your book, don't tell them the theme or type of races, leave little hints and make it mysterious that the only way they will get proper information about the world you are creating is by reading your book.

Try your best to leave some mystery in your book, the more you read the more you find out, since yours gave me the sensual vibe I feel a little research to widen your vocabulary on spways to describe sensual events will help improve your work💕💕💕💕

      star_dreamer
      Hi,
      Please let us do a review swap (plus maybe a vote too) and exchange collections:)
      Title: Rightful Vengeance
      Genre: Fantasy Romance
      Synopsis: I will hurt you for this. I don't know how yet, but give me time. A day will come when you think yourself safe and happy, and suddenly your joy will turn to ashes in your mouth, and you'll know the debt is paid.
      ~ George R.R. Martin

      In a world where creatures of our wildest dreams exist amongst one another a very long time ago, there was peace for a while.

      An attack on AADYA's family and people leave their lives in a rumble of debris, corpses and unimaginable hate.

      At some point everyone moves on except Aadya, her thirst for revenge only grows and it leads her to find a powerful witch who sends her on a quest that lasts for over thirty years.

      Her yearning for revenge creates a whole new breed of their kind, whether it be a good thing or not only the end will tell.
      Link: http://wbnv.in/a/b8fdc14
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          Cyclxne Reviewed your book as well! I didn't see your review on Unexpected Kiss though? Did something happen to it?

              A love triangle of lesbians. This is not a reborn or transitional story, it is good old-fashioned lesbians!

              Satin thinks her life is over as she watches her best friend walk down the aisle. Little does she know it is the beginning of a whole new darker adventure. Filled with heartless creatures who are willing to do anything to get their hearts back. A story filled with Unicorns, Magic, Love, Loss, lust, and Heartless Monsters!

              https://www.webnovel.com/book/monsters-of-the-heart-%5Bgl%5D_20406474406174505

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