July 2021- Review Swap here!
Samantha_R_Samuel I was waiting for your review, but it didn't came. Are you busy?
maryam_library There is no limit but you would like to have moderate number of views, otherwise they might look kind of fake lol
Cyclxne
Alancaster
Arlemit
A_lucid_Dreamer
Matthew_Chuang
Will you give a review to mine, and I'll review yours. Here's the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/hell-heaven-secret-agency_20544453306517405
Arlemit I'm done giving you reviews.
I can only suggest fixing the paragraphs and indents for the sounds like boom, woosh.
Good use of terming sound, but much more if you give it an impact.
After the description of the sound, put the bracket. [BOOM!] [WOOSH] [SWING] [RING] if you want to catch the reader's attention on what sound it is. You may remove them, actually, since you already describe them in the story, yet that's only my suggestion.
Good job writing it!
Thank you so much andy. I'm touched. I'm trying to be fine. This issue is devastating.
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Sure. Pls do the review, coll and ps. I'll do yours too.
Here's my link
Book link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/thirsty-royals-reloaded_20528276905154805
Cyclxne
Sure.
Here's my link
Book link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/thirsty-royals-reloaded_20528276905154805
I'll review yours as soon as I see your review. I also like tags.
Hey, anyone want to review swap? https://www.webnovel.com/book/primed_20513341406215005
Ezckapel done
Currer I have reviewed your work, I am waiting on you to review mine!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-7teen-let-the-pain-exist_19117090906475105
Here's the link
Alancaster Thanks, I'm reading yours now.
Dee_author Done.
Sure we can. I like tags too.
Here's my link
Book link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/thirsty-royals-reloaded_20528276905154805
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THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-7teen-let-the-pain-exist_19117090906475105
Synopsis :
Dhruv is a 17 yr old teenager who is a boy full of mysteries. Six months ago, Dhruv's father died in a car accident. And from then, Dhruv hasn't had a good day ahead. From his mom's negligence towards him to school bullies, everything seems to add more and more to his misery. But things are different now, it's 17 Jan 2017, and things aren't as they were. Fate had taken its dark turns, and now police are standing on his doors, asking questions regarding the serial killings of three of his classmates. What does Dhruv have to do with it? Does Dhruv know something?
It's not a teenage drama! It's FUCKIN murder mystery! Here, don't expect anything. Things are a bit twisted as TRUTH ISN'T WHITE ANYMORE
And Pain, Let It Exist!
Anyone for a review swap? I might take a while as I am a slow reader, but I'll review your novel so, anyone?
Btw if you don't mind, help me with some chapter comments, I don't have many! (still it's alright, if don't do it)
Dee_author Dropped a review for you, here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/how-i-became-the-strongest-sovereign_19213899106813305
Adwaid_Nambiar Dropped a review for you, here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/how-i-became-the-strongest-sovereign_19213899106813305
Alancaster I'm sorry for the long wait. I read until chapter 10. I love how the dialog was written. I'm hooked to this type of story. I'm usually a romance writer from other platforms and trying a fantasy story on this platform.
It's impressive that with every passing I read, I can't stop. LOL! I'll add yours to my library and read it later.