Arlemit I'm done giving you reviews.

I can only suggest fixing the paragraphs and indents for the sounds like boom, woosh.
Good use of terming sound, but much more if you give it an impact.
After the description of the sound, put the bracket. [BOOM!] [WOOSH] [SWING] [RING] if you want to catch the reader's attention on what sound it is. You may remove them, actually, since you already describe them in the story, yet that's only my suggestion.

Good job writing it!

    ANDYY_X

    Thank you so much andy. I'm touched. I'm trying to be fine. This issue is devastating.

      THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST

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      https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-7teen-let-the-pain-exist_19117090906475105
      Synopsis :
      Dhruv is a 17 yr old teenager who is a boy full of mysteries. Six months ago, Dhruv's father died in a car accident. And from then, Dhruv hasn't had a good day ahead. From his mom's negligence towards him to school bullies, everything seems to add more and more to his misery. But things are different now, it's 17 Jan 2017, and things aren't as they were. Fate had taken its dark turns, and now police are standing on his doors, asking questions regarding the serial killings of three of his classmates. What does Dhruv have to do with it? Does Dhruv know something?
      It's not a teenage drama! It's FUCKIN murder mystery! Here, don't expect anything. Things are a bit twisted as TRUTH ISN'T WHITE ANYMORE‼️ And
      Pain, Let It Exist!

      Anyone for a review swap? I might take a while as I am a slow reader, but I'll review your novel so, anyone?
      Btw if you don't mind, help me with some chapter comments, I don't have many! (still it's alright, if don't do it)

        Alancaster I'm sorry for the long wait. I read until chapter 10. I love how the dialog was written. I'm hooked to this type of story. I'm usually a romance writer from other platforms and trying a fantasy story on this platform.

        It's impressive that with every passing I read, I can't stop. LOL! I'll add yours to my library and read it later.

          Cyclxne Thank you for sharing your story, and I like it. But, yeah, my story stability updates are not good since I'll be updating the story only on Monday and Friday. Also, I have exclusive contracts with another platform that I need to update every day, so the update here is very slow.

          Anyways thanks for the review!

          Just type the game of revenge and the first one will be mine.

            Matthew_Chuang he/she did the same with me brother. I thought it was genuine at first but then I saw exact similar reviews on other novels too.

            Hey guys!

            I am interested in swapping reviews with you.
            Would you like to review-swap with me?

            My story- Lovingly together

            Contemporary Romance

            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/lovingly-together_20218358406350305

            Leave a message with your link in reply and after you have left a review on my story first, (cause I have had just way too many experiences with authors promising me reviews in exchange for me doing a review on their story but then later not fulfilling it) and soon after I'll leave a review on yours.

            If you add my story to your library, I'll add yours to mine.

            Let's both benefit well from this exchange!

            Thank you.

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