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  • Your novel is trash if it has harem

Here's my harem:

Ur mom, ur mom, Me, ur mom, ur mom

    Dzeeck I know you're trying to troll, but I did actually read an Indonesian writer (a big fan of High School DxD) who wrote a harem story where the protagonist's harem included his own mother (who gave him a handjob in the bath while he was still a seven-year-old kid...or was he four?), his aunt, his cousin (basically his aunt's daughter), his sister, and...a whole load of incest and girls and their mothers.

        Misguided_Rooster Actually, the guy was a reader of mine, and he begged me to edit his story. I agreed, not knowing what I was getting into.

        After a couple of chapters, I told him, "No, sorry, I'm not going to edit your story again."

            Misguided_Rooster Exposed. Share the news world wide.

            All of these book shouldn't be called Harem (Ottoman called it because it means sacred-ish, but its from the word haram), instead it's should be Haram (forbidden).

            Love from Albanian Empire đź•Ś Join my Empire, you'll be saved from the harem story. Then... the world

                Shubhangi_Kene oy oy oy .. we are taking about webnovels here ... Why you gotta shift you view there (mythology ) man .. and by the way this harem shit only looks good in fiction .. not in real life never has been .. and by the way most of the harem novels are trash literal trash .. well if you really like some mindless bitches fucking all over that "*************" mc then watch hentai at least it will really make you horny .. bye .. and yeah I hate harem .. (and I am saying this in general)

                  YulongYuXianTaiyin

                  Umm… What was incorrect about her sentence?

                  There is so much trash grammar around here that there is no need to pick on someone with good (if not perfect) grammar. You would be better off disagreeing with the content on that post, but I also agree with her there.

                  This whole thread had gone out of control, but at least make correct accusations…

                      shadowdrake27 Her? I'm a guy, dude.

                      Also, I was copying YulongYuXianTaiyin's sentence and changing a few words, so he obviously can't see the irony of criticizing me for not being able to form sentences.

                          Tomoyuki "Harem isn't my thing, BUT I'd tell people to stop reading them..."

                          It should be 'and' or 'so'. If you used 'but', then the first part would have to be "harem is my thing".

                          Also, 'he'? I'm a female.

                          And yes, we don't get along. You restarted the thread many days after by responding to mine that didn't need a response. And you have a habit of not only always disagreeing with me, but a big problem with not listening (you've done this to others, too, and I'm sure they noticed at the time). Bashing? You always start it. Whether we're on the same thread or not, I thought we would continue to ignore each other, but you had to pick a fight. Please leave your negativity away from me. Thanks.

                          P.S., This does not require a response.

                              Okay, she then. Also, I was being sarcastic and copying your sentence simply to point out that your "brussel sprouts" example don't make sense because no one will consider harem "healthy." Also, obviously it was a typo. I meant "Harem isn't my thing, BUT I'd not tell people to stop reading them." Somehow I forgot the "not" but hey, instead of pointing out if there was a typo or you know, disagreeing or whatever, you decided to attack me. No one bashed you, I certainly didn't. I didn't attack your intelligence, I only disagreed with you. Unlike you, who told me to go back to school. Then only did I respond with an attack of my own.

                              I didn't pick a fight. I simply pointed out the hole in your logic, but if you consider that "bashing" then you have issues, lady.

                                Happy_AltRight No idea, we're talking about a girl who claims that harem is healthy.

                                And on the issue of not listening to others, I think she is quite the hypocrite.

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