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Title; Monarch of The Divine

Genre; Eastern Fantasy

Novel elements; Romance, Action, Cultivation, Weak-to-Strong, Tradgedy, Lone-Wolf, Alpha MC

Yo, I'm not sure if my novel is trash or not so lets swap some reviews!
Let me know your honest opinion about the writing up to this point, I would really appreciate it.

Link; https://www.webnovel.com/book/monarch-of-the-divine_19869738006710305

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    Hello!
    Anyone up for review swap?

    Ps: Opinion and power stone are highly appreciated. :,-);)

    TITLE: Mistress Of Enchanting Dragon
    GENRE: Fantasy romance
    SYNOPSIS:

    Seventeen years old Silja Castemont, a beautiful, prideful and mysterious princess of Atlanea. The simple life of Princess Silja started to fill with questions a few days before she approached her eighteenth birthday.
    Series of horrible dreams and unusual events made her simple life complicated.
    But that wasn't all. She didn't know her act of helping an old guy would turn out to be a ticket to attend a bride choosing ceremony of the prince of the biggest kingdom of North.
    What will happen when a princess is forced to attend the ceremony by the groom's Father?
    Will she be able to find a way to escape this marriage?
    **** Donovan Regalhelm , eldest Prince of the Northern Empire.
    Handsome, powerful, cold-hearted.
    His father forced him to choose a bride before his 28th birthday.
    What will happen when a cold-blooded prince sees something interesting when he meets Princess Silja for the first time?
    He forced her to marry him by all means but the reason behind it wasn't love. It was her hidden magic that he wanted to become powerful.
    "What was so special about the princess of the small Atlanea kingdom that only she possesses?"

    EXCERPT

    The bride, dressed in white wedding dress, was sitting inside the decorated wedding chember.
    Soon the door opened and she heard the heavy footsteps coming closer.
    Silja lifted her head and saw his handsome profile hidden in the shadows.
    "Stand up." He ordered in his usual heavy indifferent voice.
    Silja gazed at him for a moment with her misty purple eyes but followed his order anyway.
    The dress was heavy making her movements clumsy.
    "Striped." He ordered as she stood up in front of him.
    "Huh?" Silja snapped her head and looked at him in shock.
    "I said, stripped all the clothes." He repeated again
    The girl was so shocked that she couldn't react.
    "Ohh do you want me to help you? What a naughty princess we have here." He moved his feet and started to walk around her in a circle. He stood behind her and moved his fingers in the air and with movements of his hand the laces of her dress started to loosen up.
    Silja felt her dress losee and hastily tried to secure it.
    He came forward after opening all the laces from behind.
    And with just another snap of his fingers the dress fell on the floor.
    "Nooo"
    The girl's eyes were filled with tears but she refused to let them fall.
    And in the next second all the fear disappeared from her eyes and rage took place.
    In the next second the cloth on his body caught fire and the ashes flew in the air.
    "Interesting." He smiled like a devil.

    LINKS:

    https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/20252183706682905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305758565

      Hello! Review swap, please? Thank you!

      Don't forget to vote, comment, and add to the library! ^ _ ^

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      Title: Scarlette Overland
      Genre: Fantasy Romance, Action, Mystery
      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/scarlette-overland_19923920306012005

      Synopsis
      What is the SECRET behind her name?


      “Is it just plain curiosity on your part that is why you are pestering me all over again? If that is the case then, why not uncover the mysteries that surround me all by yourself if you are that eager to know?”


      A mysterious and powerful adventurer within the whole Empire has a deep secret and that secret is known only by her and no one else. But what will happen if her secrets are slowly being revealed by the people who are hunting her from her past? What will she do?

      Scarlette Overland, the famous solo SSS-rank adventurer from Silveria Empire, the largest and most powerful Empire within the Miris Continent. A lone adventurer who prefers working solo missions rather than taking someone else or joining a party for certain reasons.

      She is an enigma to all her fellow adventurers and all of the people who knew her because no one has ever seen her real face as she kept it hidden underneath the mask she is wearing and only her unique crimson-lilac eyes that can be seen. Her identity is unknown.

      There is a reason for it. She’s hiding a SECRET. A SECRET that can only be known by her and no one else.

      But there is a saying that; ‘All secrets are bound to be revealed’

      A certain mission request that she took out of a whim and because of that, for the first time, she took a completely foreign adventurer to be her first-ever companion and along the way, old and new enemies are appearing one by one and her secrets are slowly going to be revealed and this time, Scarlette needs to face the greatest challenges that would come to her life.

      Are you ready to unveil the mysteries and secrets of her past?


      Winter Scarlette Vermilion
      @empressblackrose09


      EXCERPT:

      After some minutes had passed, the man chuckled as he closed the report details of the person he is looking for and a smirk appeared on his lips as he speaks.

      “You are still the same as before. What a smart choice of choosing a name for you to hide. That is one of the aspects that I loved you the most”

      His sparkling jade long hair shines underneath the moonlight from where he stands and as he turned around to looked at his aide, his mismatched golden-silver eyes had a glint of happiness and sadness at the same time as he continued.

      “Make sure to send someone to protect her in the shadows at all cost. Those people who are looking for her, tried everything to block all the information about her. I won’t let them touch her again, are we clear?”

      His voice screams authority as he said those orders to his aide and the said aide knew what his master meant and he complied.

      “As you wish Your Excellency”

      After that, the aide left his master alone on the balcony and the man once again looked outside to collect his thoughts as he sighed.

      “I finally found you, Scarlette Overland. My fierce Wife. My Empress”

        RedSonia I'm done with reading/reviewing yours, and yep.

          See which one do you want to review swap
          White Lotus (Omegaverus) (P.S. no white lotus act)
          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/20397666605919005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310067693
          Synopsis - The silver haired guy sat on roadside bench looking at the cars passing by.
          "Finally got thrown out." Charles ridiculed the lad before getting hit by his bag.
          "You responsible for this, you idiot." Hearing Chase use those words for himself Charles didn't felt bad. Well, not everyone could hear the well mannered Chase cursing.
          Charles lifted the omega's bag and pinched his nose tip that has turned red due to the cold.
          "You should have wore more clothes."
          "Let me stay at your place tonight. And learn some manners idiots you should have gave me your jacket not some empty advice."
          "You wanna stay at my place....you have pay. And you called me in the middle of the night forget about jacket I came wearing slippers. IDIOT."
          Hacker Z (BL)
          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/20371319306847105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310067693
          Synopsis - Chase a top singer in western countries is actually the infamous Hacker Z. And Charles the CEO of Galactica group is the same person who almost defeated him 3years ago. Will Chase be able to use Charles to gain his goal? Or the situation might take a different turn.
          "Mr. Charles do you have some kind of special interest in me?" Chase.
          "...." Charles.
          "Hey come on, I am okay with it." Chase.
          "Sorry, we can't." Charles
          "Huh, that's weird. You are the male lead, I am the main character aren't we supposed to be inseperable? Even if enemies tries to seperate us, we are supposed to defeat them. What could go wrong?"Chase.
          "The problem is the we are the enemies here. And the situation is too cringe." Charles.
          "Jeez, if you act like this I might as well play the villain hacker who kidnaps you." Chase.
          "See you don't even act like a main character." Charles.

            Sun23 I see your review in inkstone inbox, but it’s not showing on the site. I guess you used some word that WN found inappropriate, so their censorship kicked in.

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              MORTAL GODS: Enouka

              Synopsis:
              A prisoner out for revenge, a power-hungry redhead, a fallen god and a little princess with superpowers and an impossible quest, go all out in the fight to acquire the power capable of destroying the multiverse. Whether it is to save a kingdom, to get revenge, for world domination, or merely to fall in love with it, none of them can do without this power... and so they bring Carnage! This is a tale of revenge, of betrayal, of love and of powers.

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                Marie

                Hello, how are you guys? I would like to recommend another of my novels. This novel works as the entrance to the multiverse of all my novels already written or future ones.

                Sypnosis:

                The plot is about a goddess girl who loses everything she loves when she is attacked on a special day.

                After this, she will have to survive in a bloody multiverse where her only family will be an arms dealer, who will teach her everything he knows so that she can learn to survive.

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                  Hi all, I'm a longtime writer that's still new to the world of Webnovel. Would be happy to swap reviews!

                  Please see the details of my serialized novel below:

                  LINK: https://www.webnovel.com/book/cloudchaser_20752678406647605

                  Title: CLOUDCHASER

                  Genre: YA Fantasy/ Adventure/ Horror

                  Synopsis: In the seemingly endless void of the Land Without Land, the School of the Outside stands as the sole bastion of learning, stability, and possibly existence. For both students and teachers, travel outside the School is so dangerous as to be unthinkable. But when a group of restless young student discover something extraordinary beyond the school walls, they will learn that the call to adventure is more wonderful and perilous than they could have ever imagined...or feared.

                  TLDR: Group of restless high school students explore and attempt to understand the mysterious and dangerous void of the Outside. Some days go better than others. Things get weird.

                  EDIT: Does anyone know how to find the link that connects to a story's cover? I'm trying to post my cover and finding a portable link has been a challenge

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