Title: Falling Stardust
Vol title: Estia's revenge
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/falling-stardust-estia's-embrace_20953821806532805
Genre: Action| adventure|fantasy|romance|
Synopsis: Having broken through to a much wider world, achieving his dream seems even more impossible. Xasha fearlessly charges into a continent full of powerful and ruthless races to carve out a place for the human race to thrive after millions of years of suffering in the abandoned region.

Author's comments. "At the root of it, Falling Stardust is about overcoming hardships, learning from mistakes, having trust in those around you, and finding one's place in this world. It is a coming-of-age story but also a one-man against the world story that will have you on the edge of your seats. Don't believe me? Try it and see."

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    Incursio_07 🤷‍♀️ There isn't a suitable category for my work so I just went with contemporary romance. It was the best option among horror/thriller, fantasy romance, Sci-fi, history, LGBTQ+ and Teen.

        Akira_Monadelle I read your book from Chapter 1 to 2, I liked how it started and how you are developing the character even the minor characters. The advice you left at the end about Chapter 2 is important so as to warn minors if there are any. I read little of Chapter 3 and when I saw "I hated my job", I was wondering what you wrote in Chapter 1 about the MC having no job. Then I noticed "Five years later". Cloey told her of a job opportunity as a Business Analyst. This is where I was able to read to. I do not have the time to read your book but I will surely make time as this is one of the best romance books ever. Novels are made from sentences. To make sentences, you use words and you used the correct choice of words to make the plot. I believe there are three things that make a novel; Plot, Theme and Background.
        So I shall review your novel by these three:
        Plot - 7/10
        Theme - 8/10
        Background - 8/10

        The plot was amazing but how does someone have sex with someone so early in a novel. It is like meeting a girl for the first time and asking her to be your girlfriend. She might reject or say you two will have to get to know each other better.
        The theme for me is the words. You used the correct choice of words but made some mistakes with the punctuation known as comma.
        The background is the environment where the theme is displayed. You made sure that they were seen having sex. You made sure that she had a job as an ice cream woman which was described as the worst job ever. You gave her the opportunity of working as a Business Analyst. I will surely continue reading to find out what happened.

        Final review - 23/30

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