Oya_Dawish Done with name Chase_Xavier123, I can change the review if you want as I also feel it was kind of biased in the review.
But not to be rude but I think I still can't the world building can be improved I am not saying info dumping. I don't want a chapter the kingdoms taxation system but at least the some ifo about kingdoms like why is the palace build close to a village not capital. I kind of got the idea what kind of person the king is but the kingdom I didn't get any idea.

    Cyclxne sure I would love to! I would review yours as soon as I can, within 1-2 days time! Hereโ€™s mine, you can choose one of the two~ :>>

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