In terrible need of an editor.
I will take a look at the story and contact you if I find anything. (Haven't read it yet)
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Poche You could try writing in your native language. Who knows maybe qidian might offer an English translator who speaks your language one day. Its always best to plan ahead. You don't want to wait till it happens to start your story.
If you're still need some help on editing and proofreading, I'll be happy to help.
Lord_Meh_Meh that would be a very roundabout way of publishing.