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Hello! Would anyone like to do collection/review swap upon my latest novel?
Here's the link https://webnovel.com/book/will-you-accept-my-broken-heart_23359681005042805
Hello! Would anyone like to do collection/review swap upon my latest novel?
Here's the link https://webnovel.com/book/will-you-accept-my-broken-heart_23359681005042805
Chainslock Sure thing, here is mine.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/tale-of-death_23387634606443505###
MerrySweet hi are you done reviewing?
Sneakycat098 Sure thing! As long as you leave me an honest review. https://www.webnovel.com/book/synthwave_23250082806757105
RogerKaos done from my side! I hope to receive honest review as well
Sneakycat098 hi there, I just left a review and collection. Here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-ghost-within-my-heart_23233638506682605
RogerKaos just left a review. You swapping? Heres the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/heroes-of-the-storm_23233543006682205
GEEGEE
This is my link also send me your link
http://wbnv.in/a/e6gvy3z
Sir_WendoS
Youuuuu owe me flowers and chocolate for all the tears I shed over your novel!
I loved it.
@Sneakycat098
No I was so into the ghost story, I paused that to go to yours now
Sir_WendoS I am done too! It was fun reading your novel. Best of luck!
MerrySweet no problem. Just let me know when you're done
@Sneakycat098
It was Lara first 3 or 4 chapters, then you switched to Luna (the body she transmigrated to). Was it because she got her memory back or another sort of significant transition or was it something that you missed while editing?
That said. The story is really good. as a fellow speaker of English as a second language I live your same struggles with grammar, the flow of your novel would flow a thousand times better if you picked a tense and kept using it. Past tense then go with :went liked lived etc... it strikes the wrong chord when you go with: went, like, living etc... man I hope I'm making sense by now.
All that aside, I really like the story and it's in my library. It's a 5 star novel for me.
If anyone else is interested, I will review any novel for a power stone to my novel below:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/farewell-my-ceo-husband-i-named-his-baby-'revenge'_23348038306234505###
Other accounts are also fine, just let me know it was you.
ZeroX0666 Just finished doing yours review, hope you like it.
Motsu_Kion You want to swap? If yes then let me know. Here is my link:- https://m.webnovel.com/book/red-blood-century_22463517005516305