Koita please, next time please ask me first as I said, but we'll since your story sounds interesting in the synopsis I will also give it a go and leave a review after reading the first 10 chapter

    GraygoryRhodes done. The writing of the novel is great but the character progression and plot are a bit off. I can see that you want to rush.

      goffyboy because it was the prolog of the story, I did not mention details on purpose 😃
      Also done reviewing your bock, great story, if you work a bit on your grammar it will be a great work

        goffyboy for me Is ok a first impression based only on the first chapter and bookcover synopsis.
        I usually do It that way, Is It alright with you?

          goffyboy We are probably close geographycally speaking...I finished reading but will review tomorrow.

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