GraygoryRhodes done. The writing of the novel is great but the character progression and plot are a bit off. I can see that you want to rush.

    goffyboy because it was the prolog of the story, I did not mention details on purpose 😃
    Also done reviewing your bock, great story, if you work a bit on your grammar it will be a great work

      goffyboy for me Is ok a first impression based only on the first chapter and bookcover synopsis.
      I usually do It that way, Is It alright with you?

        goffyboy We are probably close geographycally speaking...I finished reading but will review tomorrow.

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