ZyRule Reviewed yours. It is good.
But I would advise you to revisit the chapters again. The 'his' and 'her' are wrong there. In the first chapter, I thought the protagonist is male. Later in the second chapter found out it was female. The synopsis too tells us about a female vigilante.
Also, there is a bit of confusion about the protagonist's age in the first chapter.

    Hey Little Devil Here! Anyone up for a review swap? My own is a cultivation novel. I'm not one for leaving comments as I tend to believe every author has their own way of writing and adding in details. However, if you request it, I will do so. My novel link is:
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/heaven's-mercy_25810244005985305
    Also no promises, but if I really like your novel and I have time, I might offer to help edit it.

      ViciousPepper
      I'm reading your novel right now, its really great! I usually don't post my review till I at reach chapter 10 or 15. But, I love the beginning, a bit cliché, but a good cliché.
      Alright all done! Honestly a great novel, I'm looking forward to reading more! I would offer to help edit it, but honestly, your writing is impeccable.

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        GMSJakers
        I am not rushing you I just wanted to check in with you and see if you were still planning on reviewing my book. I'm not sure if you noticed but I did post yours in a couple days ago. I was just following up .

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