Tony_Torres_2081

I have finished reviewing your story, thanks for reviewing mine.
Could you please elaborate a bit of what you meant about the hiccups with story beats?
I would like to fix it if I can.

    f0011
    sure, I will start working on it.
    Please read 5 chapters before reviewing mine.

      ThePotatoKing Hi, I can review swap. I will also leave comments and add this into my collections, hopefully, you can do the same thanks!

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